Feedback - 13.02.09

Well done on completing the prelim task. You need to evluate this a little more fully really. Some of your framing was a little awkward and your shot tupes a little unvarioed. You didn't include any close ups for example! You need to ensure your storyboard for your sequence is complete - let me check it then we can post it. The next job will be to produce props list and a filming schedule. (Mrs A)

Preliminary Task

After filming our preliminary task we have noticed some things we can improve on when we film our actual opening sequence. Rather than one shot of the girl walking through the door and sitting down we could have made this two shots because the girl becomes out of focus when she sits down and is out of the shot.

We also could have done more footage than we did. If we had collected more footage it would have made it easier when it came to editting.

AMY AND HAYLEY :]

Feedback 6.01.09

Hi girls. You now need to get your storyboard completed and show it to me asap. You've only four weeks left to complete your sequence and filming and editing both take a long time.
Mrs Abell